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    dots Submission Name: killing timedots
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    Author: unnatainable
    ASL Info:    20/F/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 48/42/23
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
    Total Views: 789
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 431



    Description:
       on chuck norris' watch there are no hands or numbers .. just a blank face with "killing time".


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    dotskilling timedots
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    just killing time
    waiting for the day
    when you say its over
    my number nine
    its killing time
    blade or bullet
    my winter cover
    the cold that stings
    your everything
    my night is over
    day will break
    it feels so wrong
    my slow demise
    the sinking feeling
    it takes so long
    my lonely cries
    just killing time
    its kiling time




    Submitted on 2006-10-21 22:45:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      different. I didn't really get it, just sorta seemed like you were killing time by writeing this. *think nice thoughts* um, sorta seems like your killing time till your boyfrind breaks up with you and that you were talking about stuff, but hey it is a good poem takes a few read thrus to get it but it could be cause its like 1:00 in the morning so its hard for my brain to work. its a nice poem keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Ryou_Bakura | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is really good for real it just reached out and grbed me i am not a big fan of love as a topic but this just came out right i am going now to reade all your stuff i am a fan now for sure
    | Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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