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    dots Submission Name: Chang my derectiondots
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    Author: Black-Death
    Elite Ratio:    1.2 - 18/86/138
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsChang my derectiondots
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    Good morning day... im sorry i coulnt make it today... all my freinds... gone.... i try and fly...... If i needed some help... if i needed some one to love me back... id change my ways... if i needed some one to kill me id change my derection before i drownd... drowned.... Good by day... sorry i coulnt make it today... Hello night...




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