Chang my derection by Black-Death

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Submission Name: Chang my derection dots

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Author:	Black-Death
Elite Ratio:	1.2 - 18/86/138
Words:	63

Class/Type:	Poetry/Passion
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Chang my derection dots

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Good morning day... im sorry i coulnt make it today... all my freinds... gone.... i try and fly...... If i needed some help... if i needed some one to love me back... id change my ways... if i needed some one to kill me id change my derection before i drownd... drowned.... Good by day... sorry i coulnt make it today... Hello night...

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