Chang my derection

Author: Black-Death Elite Ratio:    1.18 - 18 /89 /139 Words: 63

Class/Type: Poetry /Passion Total Views: 854 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 335

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Chang my derection

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Good morning day... im sorry i coulnt make it today... all my freinds... gone.... i try and fly...... If i needed some help... if i needed some one to love me back... id change my ways... if i needed some one to kill me id change my derection before i drownd... drowned.... Good by day... sorry i coulnt make it today... Hello night...

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