Breath strong with brew
Heads turned up
Orange blossom maybe?
Breeze picks up the burning ash
Carries it over our heads
Cooling embers seem to come from no where
Gently dying on closed eyelids
that was really good you must have real skill most people would think this was rambling, but I thake it your taking about a bon fire and danceing around it. take skill to do something like that. but most people would not get this unless they had the same level of knolage. which my spelling dosen't show very well, but thats why we have word right?