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    dots Submission Name: My Little Black Bookdots

    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I'm not quite sure what inspired this write. I just kind of sat down with my pen and paper and it flowed out of my mind onto the paper,... if that makes any sense. I don't suppose it matters, I just figured I would share the latest mind wrack lol. Enjoy..

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    dotsMy Little Black Bookdots

    With the turn of a page,
    My mood can be changed,
    With the stroke of a pen,
    My thoughts get deranged.

    Flip open my book,
    My collection of thoughts,
    Be prepared to find,
    More than you sought.

    In these simple writings,
    Hide all my dreams,
    My regrets and demons,
    What does that mean?

    Read every word,
    If you dare to know
    What goes on my head
    It is quite a show.

    Dancing in circles
    Are the secrets I keep,
    The puddles of lies,
    Is only waist deep.

    Read on to find out
    What my past holds,
    Just don't be surprised,
    When the nightmare unfolds.

    My heart lies within these pages,
    Just waiting to be found,
    You can hear my tears falling,
    As you listen to me drown.

    Death, love, nature and hate,
    Kept in my little black book.
    If you really think you're brave,
    Go ahead and take a look.

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      Little black book that nobody will read
    Inside it the blood of my mind that I bleed
    Every single moment of every single day
    Hidden and written in every possible way
    Read it if you want to, read it if you dare
    For open my little black book...and beware.

    A little summary of what I think your message was. Though yours was wondefully done with the rhymes. I shall regard my journal with higher reverence now :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      I keep my black book in my mind. Safe there. Don't think anyone could be tortured by it's contents if he doesn't split my head open. Creative hidingplace. I like this. Nice rhymes n' all.
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      This is absolutely fantastic. I love it. I can completely identify with you on this because that is exactly how I feel about my own pink notebook of poetry. The rhyming, rhythym- all good. Well done.

    Now as reciprocity is my policy, please comment back on one of my works. =]
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Aurora-Borealis | [ Reply to This ]

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