Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My Little Black Bookdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 400
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1055



    Description:
       I'm not quite sure what inspired this write. I just kind of sat down with my pen and paper and it flowed out of my mind onto the paper,... if that makes any sense. I don't suppose it matters, I just figured I would share the latest mind wrack lol. Enjoy..


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy Little Black Bookdots
    -------------------------------------------


    With the turn of a page,
    My mood can be changed,
    With the stroke of a pen,
    My thoughts get deranged.

    Flip open my book,
    My collection of thoughts,
    Be prepared to find,
    More than you sought.

    In these simple writings,
    Hide all my dreams,
    My regrets and demons,
    What does that mean?

    Read every word,
    If you dare to know
    What goes on my head
    It is quite a show.

    Dancing in circles
    Are the secrets I keep,
    The puddles of lies,
    Is only waist deep.

    Read on to find out
    What my past holds,
    Just don't be surprised,
    When the nightmare unfolds.

    My heart lies within these pages,
    Just waiting to be found,
    You can hear my tears falling,
    As you listen to me drown.

    Death, love, nature and hate,
    Kept in my little black book.
    If you really think you're brave,
    Go ahead and take a look.




    Submitted on 2006-10-22 02:25:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Little black book that nobody will read
    Inside it the blood of my mind that I bleed
    Every single moment of every single day
    Hidden and written in every possible way
    Read it if you want to, read it if you dare
    For open my little black book...and beware.

    A little summary of what I think your message was. Though yours was wondefully done with the rhymes. I shall regard my journal with higher reverence now :)
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      I keep my black book in my mind. Safe there. Don't think anyone could be tortured by it's contents if he doesn't split my head open. Creative hidingplace. I like this. Nice rhymes n' all.
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      This is absolutely fantastic. I love it. I can completely identify with you on this because that is exactly how I feel about my own pink notebook of poetry. The rhyming, rhythym- all good. Well done.

    Now as reciprocity is my policy, please comment back on one of my works. =]
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Aurora-Borealis | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    122357

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    To written by SavedDragon
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Giving written by jjd
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Push written by JanePlane
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry