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    dots Submission Name: The Mountain Kingdots
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    Author: Zu
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 446/379/76
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       this was after i wrote on the altar of madness, trying to recapture that murkyness and the evil that i was feeling that time, altho on the altar of madness isn't evil, it is about evil, this time it is evil...


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    Beneath the remains,
    Into the pandemonium,
    The hall of the mountain king,
    The evil twisted keeper of violence.

    Defying and resisting heaven
    Scorning and laughing at god
    He is last in line
    Of the mountain kings.

    Rusting in peace
    With an appetite for destruction
    Lost somewhere in time
    Waiting for his followers.

    The master of reality
    Spending the seasons in the abyss
    Wallowing in darkness,
    Drawing strength from evil.

    One day he will emerge
    Powerful than before,
    He hasn’t broken the oath
    He is still the mountain king.

    He will come for us one day
    Killing the years of decay
    He will be our resurrection
    And then we will hail the crimson idol…




    Submitted on 2004-05-26 12:51:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awesome, I loved the part "he is the last of the line"... it adds a sort of desperation in the situation =^..^= another great write, but I've liked your other one better... can't remember which one.... ~Cora Z
    | Posted on 2004-05-26 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]


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