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    dots Submission Name: Quadriplegic Consciousdots
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    Author: dismentled
    ASL Info:    26/M/"South of Heaven"
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 625/583/215
    Words: 362
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 175
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2389



    Description:
       my first comedic write, from about 6 years ago, thought it was long gone!


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    dotsQuadriplegic Consciousdots
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    My conscious is a quadriplegic
    it’s on permanent disability
    has been from the beginning
    when momma dropped me!
    occasionally it tries to stop me
    the voice is just too faint,
    if momma never dropped me
    lord knows I coulda been a saint!?

    my conscious is a quadriplegic
    can’t tell me what not to do!
    Conscious is a quadriplegic
    watch out for me if I was you!
    my conscious is a quadriplegic
    it’s on permanent disability
    so if you come over, you been warned
    PLEASE DON’T SMACK ME!

    just the other day at school
    had to go to the bathroom,
    was a rapists on the loose,
    brought my friend Mathew.
    but, he pissed me off
    so I pissed on him!
    drenched from head to tow
    asking me if I had a conscious

    So I said to the drowned rat…

    my conscious is a quadriplegic
    can’ tell me what not to do!
    conscious is a quadriplegic
    watch out for me if I was you!
    my conscious is a quadriplegic
    it’s on permanent disability
    so if you come over, you been warned
    PLEASE DON’T SMACK ME!

    Fucking bitched narced on me
    So the principle I did see
    “it’s not the first, doubt the last”
    “don’t worry it’s all in the past”
    grabbed my pass, smacked her ass
    now I’m seeing a shrink again
    asked why I pissed on a friend
    “be chill” cant hold me accountable
    “why not” ah, here we go again!

    now I’m in a nut house
    my such lovely white-walls
    nurses think I’m crazy!
    singing “Deck the halls”
    asked me what the hell my problem was
    “I really have to tell you?
    alright, if you say so…

    my conscious is a quadriplegic
    can’ tell me what not to do!
    conscious is a quadriplegic
    watch out for me if I was you!
    my conscious is a quadriplegic
    it’s on permanent disability
    so if you come over, you been warned
    PLEASE DON’T SMACK ME!

    My conscious is a quadriplegic!
    My conscious is a quadriplegic!!
    My conscious is a quadriplegic!!!
    My conscious is a quadriplegic!!!!
    My conscious is a quadriplegic!!!!!

    IT’S ON PREMANENT DISABILITY!!!!!!




    Submitted on 2006-10-22 10:01:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I don't feel you meant this, directly, to be a slam or negative against quadriplegic - I like lighthearted pieces and we all suffer from some kind of "handicap" - This piece, for me, is more towards those in your environment who are the ones who can't deal - or deal with you.

    Good and different from you. Punk Rock song?

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      this is kindof ....harsh, and i have a relative who is quadriplegic, so some people may find this offensive in some ways. if this isnt meant to be rapped, i would go over the grammer so that it makes more sense~
    muchlove-ash
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by DanceADream | [ Reply to This ]



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