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    dots Submission Name: The Eggdots
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    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Eggdots
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    Thin porcelain shell
    of jewlers precision
    holds the secrets
    of beginning life
    small universe lies
    with-in clear skies
    suspended in eternal time
    lets look for a moment
    at this delicate dish
    taken for granted
    from everyone's fridge.
    please marval the vision
    Gods first decision
    the increadible
    edible
    egg





    Submitted on 2006-10-22 10:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      who'd have thought it? a poem dedicated to the...egg...lol
    this is fabulous. i love it. so simple yet describes the egg perfectly!
    you are great!!
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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