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    dots Submission Name: Innocencedots
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    Author: wildriver
    ASL Info:    18/Female/kearney, NE
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 13/12/12
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsInnocencedots
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    My reflection,
    my intention,
    change as the wind frees
    all my objections.

    Spill no more secrets,
    hold onto new hands;
    watch as the waves take
    every memory of sand.

    Where once stood a diamond
    now stands a glass shard:
    what happened to her inner light,
    who came and stole her heart?

    Innocence by name,
    lost in time by trade.
    Never found til the day of parting,
    again never yours to gain.

    Locked in a box,
    every tear, every dream;
    who holds the key
    can never be seen/




    Submitted on 2006-10-22 11:41:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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