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    dots Submission Name: Come on let's lovedots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 502
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 629



    Description:
       A little love poem... not my best.


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    dotsCome on let's lovedots
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    Let's waste time
    Just you and me
    So we can be lost
    For all eternity

    Let's sing a stupid song
    To remind eachother
    Where we belong
    We belong to one another

    Let's kiss in the rain
    So I know your here
    All our problems will slip away
    Hold me so dear

    Let's fall in love
    and learn from our mistakes
    Never hurt eachother
    Do whatever it takes

    Let's promise forever
    because we know it's true
    We'll have eachother
    We'll make it through




    Submitted on 2006-10-22 20:36:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very nice piece (can i tell you something i read this to my boyfriend and he loved it). very nice indeed, quite refreshing.

    Tu amor,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice! The love seemed to steam off my screen hehe. Great job expressing such a wonderful emotion.

    ~KiKi
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ]


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