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    dots Submission Name: Friends never lastdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Description:
       A poem about how friends change and stab you in the back.


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    dotsFriends never lastdots
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    Friends forever
    What a lie
    How much you change
    In such little time

    One day you'll be okay
    The next your not
    All the laughs that you laughed
    And the fights fought

    You plan your lifes together
    Planning to stay
    The same forever
    But it hardly turns out that way

    Lies and backstabbing
    Being hurt
    Treated like crap
    and lower then dirt

    Harsh words said
    Rumors started
    The end of your world
    you want to be dead

    Friends forever
    Doesn't last long
    People change
    That's the truth all along.




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      I can relate to this, a friendship of mine ended just shy of disaster but in the same breathe i cant relate because i do have really good friends who have my back. I dont know what the future holds for us and our friendship but i find myself quite optimistic.

    Love, Light & Laughter,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate with this for i to feel rage at some points in my life. And my friends do hurt but i forgive and let them back in because sometimes a boy can never keep people apart. And harsh words can be just confused hurt. So for give and forget but something so hurtfull as something over a backstabbing problem must be left and the person must be drop so you won't have to hurt. But is annoying is all they are then just tell them they will stop and learn to contol it.

    Luv alway'z


    Kelsey trying to help
    | Posted on 2006-11-18 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]


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