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Author: Black-Death
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look at this part of me... slowly rooting awway me... look at this tomer... this part of me.. reminds me of my life... reminds me of the cuts that scare my soul forever... im sick of this This is testing my sainity... let me cut my self free from this canser thats killing me... i feel it every day... i feel it changing me.. so let me cut it off... let me fight back...

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