Life Well Wasted

Author: Sweet as Sugar ASL Info:    17/F/WY Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 43 /50 /13 Words: 118

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Life Well Wasted

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Sitting there upon a stair she's scared An inborn fear of doubtful days and hate What kind of pain she must have always bared. Now looking, in the mirror she sees fate Cruel and spiteful it rips her into ruin Drags her fragile body into its grave Death came early and on black wings flew in. When hell's angel comes, why try to be brave? At her funeral they gave her a rose One falling petal graced her casket In life they held her favor I suppose Now, in death, black petals fill her basket. The Devil laughs as she's put in her place. Its over now, she has finished her race.

Submitted on 2006-10-22 22:15:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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ap huh? another one of those overachievers who thinks they are better than the rest of us... you continue to think that you are special... you continue to mislead yourself, and when we rise.................... you will fall to your knees and promise your allegiance to the new reich.

| Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]

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