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Dead finaly

Author: Black-Death
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Dead finaly

Finaly i can let go of life... Finaly... i can let go of love... finaly my hearts dead... it will never live again... because iv made sure its dead.. and burryed 6 feet under.. no one shall ever get to it again

Submitted on 2006-10-22 23:20:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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