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    dots Submission Name: Self Pity Doesn't Work For Medots

    Author: Acid
    ASL Info:    17/M/Newport, WA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 103/159/76
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Aaaa.... I don't know how to describe it.

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    dotsSelf Pity Doesn't Work For Medots

    Of my reclusion,
    Is wittnessed on thier faces,
    A minor implication,
    One I'll need to deal with.

    Was here and now is long gone,
    I wish I never had it,
    For I feel worse off without,
    It should have never came.

    Towards my friends,
    Who forgot that I,
    Who was hurt by thier words,
    Have feelings too.

    With my lot in life,
    Leaves me with contempt,
    As a cloud of doubt,
    Devours my emotions.

    Reminds me that I'm real,
    To know I cannot lie,
    For pity's sake, I tried,
    Isn't that enough?

    For my hate,
    Whch really isn't true,
    All I did is just stop caring,
    For anyone or anything at all.

    Of what I said,
    Has always left me,
    Guessing what to do,
    If I should really try.

    Spew forth, like water,
    In which I drown myself,
    Without knowledge of,
    If I'm hated by you.

    Is all that I know,
    All I can feel,
    As it festers inside,
    My heart and soul.

    The Truth,
    Is I don;t want to,
    Talk about my problems,
    I want to lock them,
    All away, deep inside,
    My pathetic poems.

    Submitted on 2006-10-23 12:07:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Cool. I like the definitions and stuff. Really nice poem though. It really touched home. I like the lie being water. Great poem buddy
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by dontgetemo | [ Reply to This ]
      hey dude... you should just hurt retarded kids or something.
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]

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