i also liked how you rhymed every third line, it creates a nice, neat rhythm. i think we tend to forget the original reasons for these holidays, they get so hyped up commercially, the real history gets forgotten...such a shame. i love seeing the children all dressed up tho', an adults too! loved your poem, gets me in the mood for the scares ahead, whirl**
Interesting how you rhymed the third line of every verse.I also like how you refer to the origins of Halloween and remind us of it's original meaning.I thought perhaps you could've structured it a bit better so that it flows a tad smoother,though all in all it's a good piece and certainly topical at this time of the year.Look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers A.Cowboy.