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    dots Submission Name: Voodoodots
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    Author: _sevaStrA
    ASL Info:    15/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 10/11/8
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
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    dotsVoodoodots
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    Wondering thoughts of a voodoo doll ,
    wondering the reasons of which we fall ,
    wondering why you gave up on it all ,
    wishing I could have changed what I saw.

    You're as beautiful as a butterfly without it's wings,
    You're as amazing as the voice in which an angel sings ,
    You deserve the world and so much more ,
    Are you sure this is what you're looking for ?

    So many times you have fallen ,
    So many times you have gave up on it all ,
    Sometimes I wish to have catched you ,
    So many times I wasn't there for the fall .

    The past I'm afraid is over now ,
    I'm sorry I wasn't there in need ,
    I know you have to go at some point ..
    I'm wishing there's no blood left to bleed .

    So many misunderstandings, so many times left in the dust.
    So many times I've loved you , so many times I've relied on your trust .
    So many times I've needed you , only to be there for you in the end .
    So many times you've relied on me , so many times you didn't realize my life too was at an end .


    Just maybe someday, you could stop and see
    See this darker side of me .
    See the reasons I choose to hate
    See this deadly hand of fate..
    See the world of which I can't take much more
    See the things I have now died for
    See the witherings of a past decayance
    See the visions of a future you can't miss





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      you did a great job on this...the feeling and emotion came out and showed how must truly be feeling....keep writting...i know this is a lame comment but there's not much more to say than damn this was good...
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]


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