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    dots Submission Name: a PM with Holy Wood /evilgothchickdots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 1183
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Friendship
    Total Views: 1426
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 6843



    Description:
       We just had som fun n I say if anyone can freestyle type PM me my meassanger names on my main page just click the pic of my jokers to go there if u didnt know. N if u gona just comment/bitch about grammer. Dont bother.


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    dotsa PM with Holy Wood /evilgothchickdots
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    DrewDilla: thanx hun
    evlgothchick: yw
    DrewDilla: u know I really wish we could hang out bet u a lot of fun to be with
    DrewDilla: told u Im illiterate
    DrewDilla: n typo s dont help
    evlgothchick: yea
    DrewDilla: Im being room dj
    DrewDilla: yahoo chat
    DrewDilla: ac1
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: lol
    DrewDilla: tool
    DrewDilla: I'm a mad buddah abuser
    evlgothchick: Y
    DrewDilla: wtf thought u were 2
    evlgothchick???????
    DrewDilla: u aint?
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: WHAT IS IT
    DrewDilla: Biggie Smalles said it
    evlgothchick ??????
    DrewDilla: Nictorious Big
    DrewDilla: a mad buddah abuser
    Evlgothchick SO WHAT IS IT
    DrewDilla: lol what Buddah?
    DrewDilla: what u have at 420
    evlgothchick: OK
    DrewDilla: lol
    DrewDilla: u never heard buddah
    evlgothchick: SO POT HEAD?
    DrewDilla: yea
    Evlgothchick K, THEN YEA I AM ONE TOO
    DrewDilla: let me open my chest with only the best with shit fresher then the rest cause it opens my chest
    DrewDilla: lol repeated chest lol
    DrewDilla: ok now a test so see sensation in your brest, bet u want to cuddle n rest when I'm done then I'll have pussy fun bet u feel like u in a bun from the pleasure I release makes u think u got on a fleece not full jacket just a piece. a scarf at least? to hide the beast that must feast
    DrewDilla: your turn
    evlgothchick: brb...
    evlgothchick: ok sorry
    evlgothchick: now what/
    evlgothchick lemme read that
    evlgothchick: oh ok
    evlgothchick: i gotchya
    evlgothchick: dont think me shy im not tryin to lie im just tryin to get by with what i got it's not a lot but the shit i bought im paying for bills i just cant ignore i know this sounds like a bore but its my chore when im done we can have some fun make my heart run until up comes the sun
    evlgothchick what ya think?
    evlgothchick: you there?
    evlgothchick : drew???
    BUZZ!!!
    DrewDilla: so sorry called in other room
    evlgothchick: it's ok
    DrewDilla: ya very good hun we should do more often
    evlgothchick: wrote another while you were gone
    evlgothchick: i'm gonna give you my best, i know this is a test, in this game i am your guest, i'm your pawn, standing in your lawn, awaitng dawn, like a young fawn waiting to hear, from her mother dear, afraid she'll disappear, a single tear rolls down my face, onto the lace, that hangs from my suitcase, then i hear the base from your voice, and realize it was my choice.
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: you like that?
    DrewDilla: you choice do what? take it up the butt inside of a grass hut. You say: NO I AM NO SLUT BUT WILL DO ANYTHING SO U BUST A NUT go longer the king Tut could last way back in the past when people would fast{not eat meat} now lets see how long u can last ok here your new task go down a hole flask then hide behind your maskto avoide being in a cast So they dont hit your face but leave them a trace so u can use your mase to give them a pepper taste thjen they will be incased in a glass case n barried in there last plasse
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: haha
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: so i take it you liked it
    DrewDilla: I didnt even reread that one alot of fuckups?
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: na, it was good
    DrewDilla: thanx hun so where yours
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: ty
    DrewDilla: yw
    DrewDilla: I got to start using more complex words
    DrewDilla: but symple is fun n this I call freestyle typin
    evlgothchick Tomlinson: such as?
    DrewDilla: like 2 syllable words now sit back an obsurve how much nerve I got to bend it but first my ears hear to land it over there now I'll send it then u can mend it
    evlgothchick: brb
    DrewDilla: I was in a park last night holding a flashlight now the task might be in a flask right? Now use my casts might to move past light into night then take flight but after you take a bite of the magic mushroom then get lost in a cronic doom. Where you'll need a logic room.
    evlgothchick sorry, boss needed to use my comp... place is right
    DrewDilla: ok np u at work hun I understand
    evlgothchick ok
    DrewDilla: like 2 sylabes words now sit back an absurve how much nerbve I got to bed it but firt my hear hear I;ll lend it here now I'll send it then u can mend it
    evlgothchick : you and i are alike, in everything we like, even when to strike, fire up that shit, take a hit, pass it while it's still lit, now lets chill, take an x pill, let the secrets spill, into the night, problems out of sight, our souls take flight, into the sky, we'll fly, cuz we are so high, on cloud nine, we feelin fine, everything's devine
    evlgothchick : now share with me, and let me see, what you desire, what sets your soul on fire, is to be higher, or to be admired, maybe just to know love, out of all the above, what matters more, to be a bore, or to be adored
    evlgothchick sorry... couldnt stop
    evlgothchick lol
    DrewDilla: um defanitly absorbed till I get hardcore. Like All Gore. Now he was an eye sore. That all ways gave more then expected. So he headed over to Sedricks who always used litle bicks around his migit dick. So it a apitizing ,but it was just suprizing to be coming out Don Kings chicken wing. Till the body would fling then the bell goes ring ring n a gingaling to
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: lol
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: brb
    DrewDilla: hb
    evlgothchick666 Tomlinson: ok back
    DrewDilla: wb
    evlgothchick ty
    Evlgothchick: what ya doin
    evlgothchick: lets go to a rave, and misbehave, i'll take you to my fave, lights and bass, over the place, feels great on your face, dressed in black, fall in with the pack, don't turn back, feels great, to be in this state, getting late, not caring, lost your bearing, reality's tearing
    DrewDilla: oh u want a rave come to Chicago n I'll give u what u crave n they got every flav of style from a cave n it was built by Dave with my man spinnen. DJ Dotcom. oops his heat set off the fire alarms. Oh darnb the parties might be in a barn n every ones playen with yarn then the carnage will be manage before theres damage n everyone needs a bandage. Back in the day Dotcom. would spin me some hiphop n Ide come on mic like a cop bustin people for pop. Ya Id come out that crazy and it would amaze me so Id blaze a B then pick daisies out the maze G.
    evlgothchick i like that one
    DrewDilla: cool




    Submitted on 2006-10-24 10:42:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ahah thats pretty cool.
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]
      Very awesome. unique. great. cool. enjoyed. thanks.
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      haha wow thats a long convo
    awesome
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm...i think thats sick! (sick is a good thing) its so original, and i never would have thought of something like that...u 2 r pretty creative

    and grammar? im a grammar freak when it comes to the pieces that deserve it, but this, definetly doesnt need something like that, anyhow, awesome! i dont really even know what to say, bc its just so different.

    muchlove-ash
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by DanceADream | [ Reply to This ]
      *lol* Seems like a fun chat. I don't have any comments other then that. You were having a good time, exchanging some rhymes, confessing the love for the herb. It's all good.
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by Nihilist Weasel | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow.. I didn't know you liked our conversation enough to make it a piece of your art. Well, of course I'm not going to diss this, it's mine too ha! We should do this again sometime, had fun with it. Later!

    Holy xx
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]


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