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    dots Submission Name: Deeper than 'I Love You'dots
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    Author: Raven_TheWolf
    ASL Info:    16/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 128/128/63
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 124
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 689



    Description:
       This was kind of forced; I had to write it for school. The theme was/is "What love is not."

    Yeah, pretty crappy. I'm not very good with love-y poems to begin with. Meh. Bash it, Praise it, whatever. Just hope I don't fail english this week.


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    dotsDeeper than 'I Love You'dots
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    Love is not a lack of broken things
    She has shattered pieces in abundance
    All that matters is the glue each brings;
    Two do a more thorough job repairing

    Love is not a lack of understanding
    Not abuse,
    Nor lorn, nor repremanding
    Though, petty disagreement never hurt anybody

    Love is not a lack of respect;
    On the contrary,
    For it takes strength and a bit of intellect
    Otherwise, you're wasting time and energy

    When all is said and done, I hope that you're aware,
    Love is but a bird without wings;
    Knowing where she is going, but unsure of how to get there




    Submitted on 2006-10-24 15:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm glad I stumbled upon this poem of yours. You not only filled the requirements, but far surpassed the expectations I'm sure. Actually when re reading it, I feel the first stanza stands well on its own. Quite powerful stuff.
    I look forward to reading more.
    Carol
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked that peom you did a great job I was feelin that one for real I thought it was gonna be crappy because it was something you wasn't really interested in but was great keep up the good work keep writing you have a skill check me out when you get time give advise pbabyboo314 Love Needs holla back


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    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by pbabyboo314 | [ Reply to This ]
      you should pass english with this... even if it wasnt any good, you should still pass for doing the assignment and putting forth some effort. because after all, there is no right or wrong in an assignment such as this.

    now, on to the piece... even though you say this was force, i myself find it to be very beautiful... simply because it speaks of true things about love. i dont have much to say, because honestly, i'm up way too late, cause i cant sleep, and honestly, i'm not sure i can even think.. but, i just wanted to say that i liked this piece. oh, and my favorite part:

    Love is not a lack of broken things
    She has shattered pieces in abundance
    All that matters is the glue each brings;
    Two do a more thorough job repairing

    again, i think you did a good job with this, and good luck with you grade.

    -Poetic
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by Poetic | [ Reply to This ]



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