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    dots Submission Name: Paper Always Listensdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Yeah, another one about my book! Beware, they are different... Anyways, This is more about the fact that I write to keep from bottling emotions, because I have no one to confide in. Enjoy!


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    dotsPaper Always Listensdots
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    Can't rely on humankind,
    Trust slowly drifts away,
    Paper always listens,
    And won't repeat what I say.

    People love to gossip,
    And use words to inspire pain,
    But my pen cannot speak
    It merely provides the stains.

    Friends lose touch,
    And forget your face,
    But my book is always open,
    And never leaves its place.

    Family passes judgement,
    And loves to play games,
    My thoughts stay on this paper,
    Never putting me to shame.

    My book holds all my thoughts,
    Written with my pen,
    This paper always listens,
    To my secrets kept within...




    Submitted on 2006-10-24 18:21:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this poem. As has been said, it is very true. I especially like that the reader can relate to this poem. I know that I completely confide in my journal/poetry book. Great job
    Christina
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Super_pudding | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this because, as everyone else has said, it is true. It really is something that I think pretty much everyone on this site can relate to...or, at least, everyone who's work I have fallen across so far.
    The truth behind this is so deep, but, everyone has a muse, everyone has a person who they can tell everything to, and your person is out there somewhere. To the world you are one person, but, to one person you are the whole world.
    That saying has to be true, otherwise, the human race would not continue.
    I hope you find your person soon.
    A lovely write, welcome to my faves!.
    God Bless
    Frann. x
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Effee | [ Reply to This ]
      First thing - great user picture. Second thing - great title (and oh so true) . Third thing - great idea. No more up my sleeve. I think the meaning of this poem is something all the true poets relate to. Paper is sanctity.
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      this is something i can relate to, and most ppl here actually. the only way i can get out how i really feel is on paper, never to a person. it's amazing how many secrets each of us has, inner feelings we have that no other soul knows of.
    i think you say this very well, i enjoyed this piece.
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      That was a very catchy, thought provoking poem. I think you are providing a vivid picture of why a lot of people write their lives and thoughts on paper. I'd be curious if you would expound on that thought process and maybe interpret someone writing about a certain topic or situation.
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by Cayman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like where you are coming from in this piece because it rings true if you are a Lyricist or a Poet. I can only suggest that you challenge yourself as a writer. Try to cover ground that may be uncomfortable or unfamiliar to you.
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]


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