it's abstract cubism at it's historcial height. at first i thought this poem was for the lazy among us (*raises hand proudly*) but then it was just about guys who just can't hold it together long enough to be cool and suave to ask a girl out. i had to read it more than a few times, to strip away each layer of nerves and inner dialogue, which was great. in the end, i was laughing, which may or may not have been your intention. i apologize. =]
Firstly, thanks for the favs addition! Second, I don't make any moves with any girl (probably fear) so I could relate well after reading a few times. I still can't help but think it critises these kinds of people in a way, but I can't find any creative critism to give right now, so have a nice day!!