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    dots Submission Name: "A Single Ray of Sunshine"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 2383/1715/240
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
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    dots"A Single Ray of Sunshine"dots
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    It's amazing how much
    brilliance
    and
    how much
    warmth
    can radiate from
    a single
    ray
    of sunshine!

    Especially when that brilliance
    is framed
    by a head of bouncing
    curls
    and the warmth
    emanates
    from a childish hug
    that is meant
    only
    for
    you!

    Ron Cole




    Submitted on 2006-10-25 14:25:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a very sweet poem and I like the style of this piece very well written. A child can bring alot of sushine into life and nor many people can capture it this way I enjoyed this one a great deal.

    Ladymustang
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by LadyMustang | [ Reply to This ]
      Another lovely poem by you. I like how you start with talking about the sun and the glorious sunshine and warmth it provides, and then bring in the warmth that a child provides. You tie in the child perfectly here and there really is nothing that compares to that innocent little face smiling and laughing and the warmth that comes from a child's hug. This is a great poem.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a very cute poem. The love of a child is such a beautiful especially now of days it is important for children to have the kind of innocent love that can mold them to be a better person and find who they really are. This is a great write and the imagery made us all recieve a hug from this beautiful child.

    much LOVE
    James
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]
      I love children! I remembered my preschool students as I read this :) Definatly brought a smile to my face
    Christina
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by Super_pudding | [ Reply to This ]
      the joys we get from our children!! don't you just love the kisses and hugs?
    beautiful piece this. i got this vision of a child running towards you with arms outstretched...
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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