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    dots Submission Name: A Trip Of Colordots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 690
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    Bytes: 617



    Description:
       Driving through Hope Valley near Lake Tahoe - seasons of change - a season of beauty
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    dotsA Trip Of Colordots
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    Afloat the green pastures
    a slow moving
    stream ~ acolor!

    Fantastic blues
    subtle greens
    amidst
    richly
    golden hues
    exploding!

    A season of
    expression
    spills into
    the valleys
    Awash
    amongst
    shadows
    to peaks
    where day
    meets night

    And winds of change
    gather the clouds
    of mists from
    rivers, lakes
    and stream
    Where winter
    will weave
    its way
    back down
    A season
    to come
    a snowflake ~*~




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      you are an amazing writer. i love your work so much. i read this one because of the color in the title. i've had a thing for colors lately. i've missed you and reading your work. you were a great person to talk to when i was still in the group home system. thanks for being there. i used to really look forward to getting your messages everyday. thanks for being a friend.

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    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your words simply ooze fall. Your words simply bleed the leaves falling from the trees. Your words are the epitome of a summer gone, a fall now here, and a winter on our doorstep.

    Time goes by too quickly sometimes. Summer is gone. I am back to school. I like school, but I detest winter. The only colours I can find are white and grey, and how many poems can a person write about white?

    Despite the fact I am sad that summer is gone, your poem is splendid. My favourite line is this one:

    "Amidst richly golden hues exploding!"

    It just really caught me. I like it.

    Now is the winter of my discontent, but your sunlight keeps me warm. Write on, tiff, write on.
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      You are such an artist with your words. I most enjoyed how you ended this with a transition towards winter. I like it short and to the point, as well. Lovely, Epiphany. Just lovely.
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]
      Autumn is such a lovely time of year. You make the season come alive and breathe with this write - quite lovely.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      any nature piece u write makes me feel like i'm there, wonderful tif, as always.
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      Very vivid and colourful. Also imaginative and because I don't know what else to say I'll just say: beautiful.
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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