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    dots Submission Name: Forsaken Daysdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsForsaken Daysdots
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    My lifeís circumcision,
    Body falling into cosmic collision.
    Lifeís short canít return to the prefix,
    All ending on a crimson crucifix.
    People staring at our heartache,
    Our souls exposed left to sun-bake.
    The crowd canít help its gawks,
    We stare back with diminishing eye-stalks.
    We all meet this day of redemption,
    Tempt the light with life realizing our paralyzation.
    Sad truth from birth nothing but down hill,
    Rushing toward traffic we all end as road kill.
    Finally the meek shell is gone,
    Our tactical error transfixed toward wrong.




    Submitted on 2004-01-28 15:12:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really good. A lot of imagery is provided. "Our souls left to sun-bake" ouch!
    | Posted on 2004-01-28 00:00:00 | by kblyric | [ Reply to This ]


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