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    dots Submission Name: Paper Lovedots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 538
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 774



    Description:
       I am going through a divorce, and I have come to realize alot in the past two months. I feel as if the love I felt wasn't real, though I can't decide. I came across the marriage certificate yesterday, and I am beginning to wonder if what I had was simply... Paper Love... Hope that makes sense.


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    dotsPaper Lovedots
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    Together we had our only chance
    To live as one, in eternal bliss,
    What we thought was our love,
    Was never meant to exist.

    A love so beautifully false,
    It couldn't have been denied,
    Fooling everyone we knew,
    But the illusion eventually died.

    Fear of solitude kept us together,
    For all the wrong reasons, we stayed.
    Losing sight of what was important,
    Now the price must be paid.

    Consumed by a need for happiness,
    We went our seperate ways,
    Forsaking our spoken vows,
    We kept no promises made.

    Death of a marriage so false,
    Never to be revived
    Our paper love destroyed,
    Never a chance to survive.




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 11:32:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      woah! that [censored]in kicks ass. [excuse my lanuage] but Damn! I LOVE IT. im gonna add it to my favorites!

    :]Mandi
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Is this love? | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this one. It is true love is like paper and can be ripped at the seem. I like it. SO keep on writing don't ever stop because no one can take your pop. ( Pop is what this poem has it stands out it is very good)!!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so sad. and i do know what you mean by paper love. i'm sorry that is has ended, but it sounds as if thats for the best, maybe you can both be happy now.
    i was taken by the verse ~

    Fear of solitude kept us together,
    For all the wrong reasons, we stayed.
    Losing sight of what was important,
    Now the price must be paid.

    that spoke to me for reasons i wont go into here.
    this is a very heartfelt piece.
    good job,
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      drop that cock sucker off in a bowl of his own cum... hold his head under until he drowns in it.

    HAHAHA
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      [censored] yeah... now that's what I'm talking about!
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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