haha yea it is true sometimes you are so involded in the dream you are in you wake up and you still kind of think that it was real yea and sometimes in these dreams especially mine i get in trouble so I wake up and Im like " holy crap Im in trouble " then its like " wheeew Just a dream" guess that one thing about dreams I love and you captured it well in this song I would like to hear how this would go what kind of genre are you looking to make this?
And in these moments, I wouldn't even try to break free from these moments. Sometimes our dreamland moments are more pleasurable than the monotonous-ness of our daily lives. It gives us hope and something to look forward to. As for the poem, you seemed to lose connection with your rhythm at the third set of lines when you say "I cant" Seems a little disjointed from a transitions point of view.
I just did that very thing last night. I hate that, especially when I think I'm awake getting the things that I need to get done-done. but then I wake up and I'm like..[censored]....I didn't do anything at all, I was dreaming the whole time.