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    dots Submission Name: Life of Lies, Life of Truth, part 1dots
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    Author: SinCeer05
    ASL Info:    21mVA
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 243/279/168
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 204
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1142



    Description:
       Mix of lyrics and poetry


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    dotsLife of Lies, Life of Truth, part 1dots
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    Sounds Of Success, Drowns With Unrest,
    Buckets Of Lies Surround My Death

    A Voyage Bound To An Ocean Of Demands Testing My
    Sailors Wit,
    With Shambled Hope I’m Broke An My Clothes Are Soaked, Without A
    Tailored Fit
    I’m Uneven With My Inner Demons Seams, Posing As
    Failures Bitch
    My Thoughts Unite To March While Protest Hinders Sanity
    Repulsed Malice Of Judgment, Grotesque Is The Vanity
    Souls Death An Profanity
    Exhaled Lurid Tones Like A Foes Breathe With Acidity

    Externally Sown Behind The Shadows,
    Internally Droned Blind With The Assholes
    Struggling Strangled Staggered and Straddled
    In Threads of Time Trying To Entangle
    Fast-Dough While Trying To Escape Past-Woes,

    Smoldered To Slither On My Stomach Blistered With Parched Lesions
    Treading Thin, Glutton, I Was Fed With Sin,
    Menacing Mirages Manifest The Devil Like Its All
    Red Again, Apparitions Shed My Skin
    Reality Recoils To Rattle Swift Like Desert Snakes
    Bred To Send, Death, Never To Led Amends




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 12:16:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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