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    dots Submission Name: FRIENDSdots
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    Author: tina_mik
    ASL Info:    17/f/malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 21/22/20
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 961
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1043



    Description:
       do u feel the same way too?


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    dotsFRIENDSdots
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    A friend once wrote:

    written with a pen,
    sealed with a kiss,
    if you are my friend,
    please answer this:
    Are we friends or not?
    you told me once but i forgot.
    so tell me true,
    so i can say i am here for you.
    of all the friends i ever met,
    you're the one i won't forget.
    and if i die before you do,
    i'll go to heaven and wait for you...

    This is my reply:

    a reply for my part,
    straight from the heart:
    with nothing but honesty,
    i'm forever a friend to thee.
    in sadness and in pain,
    our friendship remains.
    if ever you are sad or blue,
    just call my name and i'll be there for you.
    if the sun shines your way,
    do have a great day,
    but i hope our memories will stay,
    i'll be smiling with you the whole way.
    a miracle called friendship happened between me and you,
    hope you feel the same way too...




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 13:42:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      the first part is a copy from a actual famous poem
    you dont desire the credit
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]
      Your friends are obviously very lucky to know you from this poem for it is very hard to get your feelings to flow properly thorugh the words so all can see them, takes a bit of skill to pull off. good work
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by ShadowedAngel | [ Reply to This ]


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