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    dots Submission Name: Schizophrenic Blurbdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 466
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 591



    Description:
       I wrote this... like two minutes ago, just sat here at my computer with nothing to do, opened word pad and started playing around. I actually kind of like this. Just something to read for sh*ts and giggles. No worries about how it sounds, flows, rhymes, punctuation or BS like that... Just a schizophrenic blurb (I suppose it would help if you knew, Kiki is my nickname, Christy, my real name, just don't call me Christy... /shudder) Teehee


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    Christy is pretty,
    She is sweet,
    I think shes awesome,
    And so are her feet.

    Christy can sing,
    When she's alone,
    Or in the shower,
    She likes the phone.

    Christy's life is crazy
    A little upside down
    But she smile real big,
    To fool everyone around.

    Christy has no friends,
    She makes mistakes,
    She quit her job, now broke,
    Love Frosted Flakes!!

    Me love her most,
    Than anyone else,
    I keep her with me,
    Just her and myself.




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      i kinda like this too! it's good for a wee giggle. i think sometimes it's good to just sit and write or type the first thing that pops into our heads, juggle it around a bit, and there you have a poem!
    sounds like you had a great time writing this.
    it a fun piece, i like it!
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      The first poem I'd call - SWEET HORROR-. It is perfect for a horror movie... where a girls sits alone holding her teddy-bear, chanting this... before ... :-S
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Non-Sens-Uality | [ Reply to This ]


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