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    dots Submission Name: Evadedots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I dedicate this to Vampiric Death because he's cool like that you know? So here's to my BF, Vampiric Death


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    dotsEvadedots
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    Let me in, Iím knocking at your door, wanting to spread the madness of this twisted form,
    your spell of protection keeps me from coming in,
    your house spitting words of hate for my kind.
    Let me in, and watch as I touch you, with every brush of my fingers against your house walls,
    I spread the illness,
    The cause of my insanity,
    To break you mind, and shatter your body, steal your identity, everything you once were.
    Let me in to evade, poke around your broken brain, and break your body down,
    So that I can use it,
    And complete the deed that has been given to me

    Evading your mind, break your spirit,
    Driving you to madness with the malice of my words,
    Whispering you imminent demise in your ear, every part of me is
    Evading you.

    Within me, darkness spreads as my blood, you falsified innocence is driving me insane,
    I canít resist the way your blood calls to me, into a lust,
    Into the paralyze blood,
    Where Iím taking you as mine, and Iím keep you bind,
    You canít escape me, or my spell,
    As I come to you and rain down my hell,
    Inside out, you can feel me inside you,
    Battling you, telling you, youíre nothing at all,
    To me, no, no, Iíll break you in everyway, test your beliefs,
    Twist you heart with my sharp, blood stained fingers,
    And then youíll know,

    That I hate you,
    Iím evading your mind, and breaking your spirit,
    Driving you to madness with the malice of my words,
    Whispering your imminent demise in your ear, every part of me is
    Evading you.






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