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    dots Submission Name: My Big Little Brotherdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 859
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    Bytes: 710



    Description:
       What I mean by big little brother, for those of you who can't figure this out, is he is my little brother, but he has grown to be bigger than me. Not to sound as if I think you are all stupid, but my own brother and mom didn't get that.. so just to be sure you understand, there you have it...


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    dotsMy Big Little Brotherdots
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    You stand three inches taller than me,
    And your voice has changed so much.
    You actually have bushy sideburns,
    You're getting manly, old, and such.

    You now have much interest in women,
    A little too much perhaps,
    You can drive a car... legally
    My heart may soon collapse,

    When I think of you, my brother,
    You are five years old with chubby cheeks,
    Now when you're in sight, and hug me,
    You pick me up off my feet.

    I can't believe how much you've grown,
    So much time lost from one year to another,
    But I am always here for you no matter what,
    My big little brother




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 15:57:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thats cute i kno sum 1 that can relate!!!
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Star | [ Reply to This ]
      aww.it's gorgeous!
    ill bet he was thrilled after reading this. i think it's great that you obviously have a close relationship. i have two sisters, both younger than me, so i can't relate, but still, its a very sweet and quite amusing poem. very touching.
    great job!!
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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