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    dots Submission Name: "Oh Michelle!!"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 2383/1715/240
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Ode to our Michelle here at Elite!


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    dots"Oh Michelle!!"dots
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    The Windy Isles
    gave us a lass
    who's lovely and
    top of her class!

    A mighty pen
    she does wield
    akin to Knight
    with sword and shield!

    Oh Michelle!
    Turn not away;
    without your posts
    dark is the day!

    You've charmed us all
    with your skill,
    post after post
    we love you still!

    Ron Cole
    October 2006




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 16:38:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It has to be you, you are truly a very special lady, I knew right away he had to be talking about you, Again Ron, this is an excellent tribute to a very special lady, Dean
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
      OH MY GOD!!
    is this for me???
    wow, i....just....don't know what to say!!
    i'm not ususally stuck for words, but you got me with this!
    you have a heart of gold, and i thank you from the bottom of mine!!
    *wipes tear from cheek*
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice tribute to Michelle, Dean
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
      Great rhythm and rhyme and a lovely tribute. Enjoyed, Peggy
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice tribute ron, proving to me yet again from age does come experience. Might just write you one now :P
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by ShadowedAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      awww thats sooo sweet!!! i [censored] love it!! aww!! <333
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]


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