I YELL at those I once called close friends
The back draft of my suppressed anger
Breaks free in a blast from my mind’s frayed ends
Hurling them away so I’m free of their danger
I SHOUT out my undying defiance to my foes
Letting them all know that I’m still here
That my will is unbroken despite their blows
And that I won’t bow down to them in fear
I HOWL like a wolf does to the moon at night
Because of memories, splintered with time,
That stick into the skin of my mind and bite
Viciously like teeth for an uncommitted crime
I SCREAM out in raging pain to the world
So that everyone hears my caged demons being fed
What that boy feels, as a ball in the corner curled
The screeching noise of that electric drill penetrating my head
I CRY bitterly, with all my agony, a loud harsh note
But a reaction from the faces around me can’t be found
For though blood should drip from my ears and inside my throat
From my lips you will hear not a sound
I love how blunt this piece is
Everything you are feeling is total raw human emotion and you exposed anger thouroughly.
my favorite stanza was :
I HOWL like a wolf does to the moon at night
Because of memories, splintered with time,
That stick into the skin of my mind and bite
Viciously like teeth for an uncommitted crime
This specifically was awesome imagery, overall I love the tone of the whole piece :)
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Okay I definetly felt that. To write it in a spurt its so strong and gosh I think i heard you scream ! That says it all.
i did like how vivid you were with this, and i feel you did a good job on the ryming. the blood part is what got me though, i loved that part. this person seemed to me to be angry and confused to all hell. dare i say even scared of them selfs and what is trying to get in. i could be off or wrong but this person seems to be introuble.
Submission Name: YELL SHOUT HOWL SCREAM CRY
