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    dots Submission Name: "Old King Cole"dots
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    Author: ShadowedAngel
    ASL Info:    17/M/Hidden
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 55/62/29
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 742
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    Bytes: 390



    Description:
       a short tribute poem to Ron Cole


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    dots"Old King Cole"dots
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    To old king cole
    A master of words
    Purveyor of fine writings
    Making the days lighter and darker with a single word
    Never backing down from his subject
    Giving out inspiration like candy
    Sweet yet tainted with poison
    Always making you think more on his words
    Making you think to use his given inspiration
    A true master of his art




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 18:26:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww, thanks Shadow! I am humbled and honored at the same time by your poem!
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      You make me want to read more of Master Cole. Being new here, I plead ignorance! We all need inspiration to continue our writing, and it looks like you have found just that. Peggy
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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