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    dots Submission Name: True Lovedots
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    Author: DeathsWife
    ASL Info:    26 F Married
    Elite Ratio:    1.39 - 39/44/6
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsTrue Lovedots
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    You are my love, you are my life
    You're everything i need
    As days go by, I realize the gift God's
    given to me.

    As time goes by
    Our love grows strong
    And in our hearts we share
    The happiness of love itself to
    Which nothing else compares.

    With each new day i want to say,
    I love you more in everyway
    There are no words that can describe
    The way you made me feel inside.

    Minute by Minute, Day by Day
    Our love grows sronger in everyway
    I know that it was meant to be
    Me for You, and You for Me
    Together we will always be as one
    Until Eternity.




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 21:38:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked this very much, I thought it gave much visualisation into love and the way that love affects us.
    If I were to be critical, which I don't really want to be, but, I think that the repetition of the word "everyway" kind of threw me off balance a bit, but, nonetheless, I really liked it.
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Effee | [ Reply to This ]
      love has ways to show things from hate to compasion as your other poems have shown. it just goes to show you have the ability to take one emotion to the other. love your work keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by drow | [ Reply to This ]
      This is lovely, DW!
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      dont listen to psyko, they are stupid. even cussed me out on my page. but hey sweetie. i loved it, i love you so much. hey good job.
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]
      Good poem. Simply put. It's true in every single way. And I hope that every person can find that true love.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      nice.... but it is a little schizo... considering your other poem.
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]



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