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    dots Submission Name: Fuck Youdots
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    Author: DeathsWife
    Elite Ratio:    1.42 - 39/45/6
    Words: 316
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 2295
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1913



    Description:
       To The People That Hated me The Most..


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFuck Youdots
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    Fuck everything you ever said
    Fuck every time you went to bed
    Fuck the trip you've been on
    Fuck every place your as has gone
    Fuck You and the way you lie
    Fuck every single reason why
    Fuck everyone who cares for you
    Fuck every bitch you ever knew
    Fuck the car , Fuck the truck
    Fuck You and your fucked up luck
    I put my love on the shelf
    So now you can go Fuck yourself
    Fuck You and those Fucked up shoes
    Fuckin bitter, oh you bet!
    But you ain't seen nothin yet
    Just Fuckin pack and Fuckin go
    Im Fuckin tired of this whole damn show
    Fuck this shit and Fuck this pain
    Fuck You and that tiny brain
    Fuck You now, im on the hunt
    And oh you can bet im goin be a Fuckin cunt
    Fuck You with your Fuckin tone
    Just leave me the Fuck alone
    Fuck the way you cry and sob
    Its time to get a Fuckin job
    You're Fuckin twisted, your Fuckin bent,
    to think I'll pay the Fuckin rent
    Fuck your beggin on hands and knees
    Fuck your laundry, Fuck the food
    Fuck You and your Fucked Up moods
    Fuck the quiet, Fuck the noise
    Fuck You and your Fuckin homeboys
    Fuck the dope, Fuck the grass
    Fuck You and your sorry ass
    Fuck the begining, Fuck the end
    Fuck You and your Fucked Up friends
    Fuck the door bell, Fuck the phone
    Fuck You and your Fucked up poems
    Leave fast please, Don't Leave slow
    Hurry just Fuckin go
    Take one from Fuckin two,
    That leaves me without Fuckin You
    Fuckin glad Your Fuckin gone
    You Fuck me once, But not for long
    Hey you Fuck, You failed the test
    You ain't Fuckin special and You
    sure weren't the best!

    So just Fuck off with all the Fuckin rest!




    Submitted on 2006-10-27 22:04:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Fukking shi*t dam
    speechless
    wat a fukken poem
    dam


    TwistedMinded
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by TwistedMinded | [ Reply to This ]
      OH MY GOD THIS WAS [censored]IN AWESOME!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]
      awesome
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by esterhzys | [ Reply to This ]
      Whoa! I don't think that could have been more brutal if you tried. No matter what anyone says, swearing (especially the way you used the word) almost always helps make writing more emotive. I love it! In the poem you point out a lot of things about the person, that's pretty cool, it sounds like there was a lot wrong with him haha.

    Keep it up, this one worked a treat!!
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Axestasy | [ Reply to This ]
      absolutely fantastic! love this poem~its like you were standing in my head, peeking through fights Ive had and feelings thought~love this and Im favin it~very creative use of the word [censored]~and sir should kiss an ass haha
    keep up the great work :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]
      Fucc yea! That's all I have to say about that.

    6
    HAIL!
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel for the poet here. So much talent wasted in playing around with a word that is both censored and devalued and now has become unshocking in its own inadequacy. Like it or not this "f" word is almost mainstream and has become futile and puerile after its shocking history.
    So, as I have said, a sad waste of talent, if you wanted to shock, there is no longer shock in the word, beyond that I would hope that the angst demonstrated has been liberated and that you might feel better for it.
    The problem with love/hate poetry is that it is almost too personal to make a genuine impact on the rest of the world and risks becoming a mere diatribe.
    Thanks for the read.

    Donald
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by siradrian | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha, this is awesome.
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by Two Meters Away | [ Reply to This ]
      it very very good and so on the mark ~nicely done~
    it rocks ~
    | Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ]
      Loved it maded me think of my ex that pisses me the [censored] off but besides that i like it it was cool
    Nice work
    It kicks ass
    BYe for [censored] now
    -Cara
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      you misspelled ass in the fourth line, but other than that, [censored]en poem. i'm adding this to my favorites...
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow sorry stupid double post
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by CFHillyard | [ Reply to This ]
      i wonder if you could have said [censored] any more times? i was thinkin about counting them just see how many times you said [censored]. i love the expresion you have put in it. Keep up the heart you put in it this one and your talent will shine like a dimond
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by drow | [ Reply to This ]
      there is a whole lotta fukkin' goin on here, and i have to say wherever there is fukkin' I'm there...call me perverted, I don't give a fukk.

    the only thing that caught me off guard was towards the end you actually said Please after going the hell off lol...just didn't seem to fit for some unknown reason.

    N.K
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Never Known | [ Reply to This ]
      just had to read this, something about the title caught my eye....lol
    full of anger, a rage explosion on screen. i love this poem!
    AWESOME!!!
    you go girl!
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      hey it was great, told you that you had tallent. great job. im just glad it wasnt directed twords me. lol

    Death
    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah... I'd like to dedicate this poem to the intended recipient of my new one SOME GIRLS AREN'T... even though i didn't write this one, it is really good and i LOVE the title.
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      F*CKIN awesome... holy f*cking sh*t, that kicks so much mother f*cking ass it's unreal.

    Really really nice f*cking work.
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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