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    dots Submission Name: Moon Mandots
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    Author: forestspirit
    ASL Info:    21/m/inside
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 58/45/27
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsMoon Mandots
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    dear moon, dear moon
    where is thy lady?
    'the moon man comes
    the lady gets ready'

    dear moon, dear moon
    is there more you wish to tell me?
    'thank the gracious maiden
    for the light she gives to smiley'

    dear moon, dear moon
    why the moon man come?
    'to renew the bond between
    the ol' lady and the sun'

    moon man, moon man
    the ol lady is waiting
    'fiery wings to lend
    the sun is about setting'
    the sunday lady is here
    the fair summer maiden
    to soar the night sky
    without any care'




    Submitted on 2006-10-28 07:42:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmmm... this is kinda odd but kinda cool too...

    the way you have those 'pieces about her' is cool... they remind me of those little notes that come with bouquets of flowers you know...
    annonymous flowers... the kind that have the little riddle or something on them that you have to try work out so you can work out who it is that sent them... i really like that (though you prolly have a deeper more mature way of looking at them lol)

    i didnt sleep a wink last night for staring at the moon which shone through my window and as a result i have half a piece moping round my head about the moon and i can see that this could be how your piece came to be too...

    it interests me that the moon is the man and the sun the lady... with the idea that the moon is just a reflection of the sun and all... yeah... i wont get too into that but its kinda beautiful to me and yeah...

    odd but nice...

    | Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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