I am hidden behind lies
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I am hidden behind lies
im happy for the moment glad for the day but when my feelings overflow this will go away i may laugh an endless laugh when in side i cry an endless cry i may sit here and say im okay even tho i want to die and even tho i smile i feel all the pain tho u dont see me crie my tears flow like rain but ill pretend im okay ill say im great and all the while im starting this hopeless fate is this my destiny is this the life im bound to live or will i simply hide away until my life should give |
Submitted on 2006-10-28 09:28:39 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| [censored] yeah!!! thats what id rank this. this is exactly what i do pretty much everyday. you hit the nail right on the head. GOOD JOB! -aaron | Posted on 2010-09-18 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ] | holy crap. this is an excellent poem i must say. if you thought the last one i commented on was childish. i must say this is good. i feel those feelings on a constant basis, therefore i can relate. inside i think most people are crying and wont admit it, even to them selfs, and you have used your poetry to express thoughts that many people refuse to say. bravo for u. and the ryming scheme, worked well. | read more later; Death | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ] | |
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