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    dots Submission Name: Undead Anthem [Working Title]dots
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    Author: MowsysWrath
    ASL Info:    15 Beastiality Bunghole
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 75/83/44
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 200
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1331



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    dotsUndead Anthem [Working Title]dots
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    A Biochemical disaster
    An infected Subject
    Bioweapon Abomination
    Hungry Mindless
    Zombie.

    A simple lake-town
    An infecting bite
    Infection Spreading
    Uncontrollable Chaos
    Zombies.

    A survivor of the chaos
    A need to live
    Death Surrounding
    Too much crying
    Zombies.

    What do you do when the dead rule the earth?
    Do you run and hide, Or fight with fury?
    How many can there be?

    A failing quarentine
    A free-for-all survival contest.
    Apocalypse upon us
    Hope is lost
    Zombies.

    A Terrorist experiment?
    Army Bioweapons?
    No worry now
    No need to know how.
    Zombies.

    A world gone to waste
    An Unexpected ending
    Lives wasted
    Flesh tasted
    Zombies.

    What do you do when the dead rule the earth? (No hope remains)
    Do you run and hide or fight with fury? (Is this a dream?
    How many can there be? (The world is against you... literaly.)

    What do you do when the dead rule the earth, empty eyes and bloody faces?
    Do you run and hide or fight with fury as they chase and consume your friends?
    How many can there be...





    Submitted on 2006-10-29 02:32:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Cool, but at first i didn't get the rythem, but now i do, I'll try rappin to it aloud and see how it goes.
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by Samantha45 | [ Reply to This ]
      I am not sure how I feel about this. I was amused, but strangely so. And zombies annoy me. Mindless fools. This is an interesting write, anyway.
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      dude awsomenesss. i digg the song.
    if u ever sing it i wanna hear ok.

    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      Mowsy
    Not a bad write here my friend
    You are definately getting better with your writes
    I have often had this same scenario in my Nightmares that I sometimes have at night
    In my nightmare though Me and a group of Eartlings always seem to talk serious with the zombies and lead them to the Light for salvation
    Ala Ghost Whisperer if you will
    Great Job Mowsy
    I look forward to reading more from you
    I Like the new Mowsie
    It seems like you have grown to accept the world and its surrondings and are just looking more answers
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I find this song rather funny, I dunno’ why just my mood I guess. This needs a work, it doesn't seem like it's set up like a normal song, like you need to put the chorus down more than the one time in the middle and twice at the end, it also seems a bit long. I wish you had a beat for it, that way it’d help me know what it’s suppose to sound like but oh well. Nice work.
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by CharlieKat | [ Reply to This ]
      This has a progressive-rock feel music in it-- i like it. I can sense the pounding of terror it portrays.

    Zombies concludes most of the stanzas. which i think could be a pre-chorus.

    The 2 last stanzas is the chorus i presume...

    The title hit me me cause i've been listening to the "Spawn" soundtrack lately.

    Watch out for the zombies the lurks around. hehehe

    Nice one!

    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by wakethedead | [ Reply to This ]



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