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Die... tonight... <3

Author: Black-Death
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Die... tonight... <3

i... feel so alive... i ... feel like i can die... i .... feel as if my life.. is worthless... as this depreshon flows over me... i take this knife across your wrists... and you take the gun to my head.... and we die tonight

Submitted on 2006-10-29 03:11:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it. Dark and interesting. Perfectly told.
| Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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