cease to feel -------------------------------------------
Lieing today.
Dying someway.
Crying tomorrow.
Maybe drowning in my sorrow.
Lifting my head so u can see my tears.
Being suffocated with all my fears.
Screaming for help as my world begins to fall.
Encaged in my thoughts surrounded by them all.
Underneath me is my ocean of tears.
Around me is my mist of fears.
In me is the pain so real.
That I wish I could only cease to feel
theres a lot of people that can relate to this. the piece itself, is short and simple but has a nice ring to it as the words escape my lips as i silently it aloud to myself. very good.
-aaron
i lked this, it is very well rhymed, quite a deep sorrowful, sad poem. maybe you should have put something into the poem about your fears.like what are you afraid of.
Submission Name: cease to feel
