this is good. its deep. its simple. reminds me of Blue Octobers "Hate Me" song. i can only fathom what would turn out like if you made it longer.
-aaron
It reminded me of a Blue October song. But don't worry, I love Blue October... so it's a compliment.
I like this, but it seems like there should be more. All the things you're telling the person to hate you for are sort of overdone. Maybe throw in some words that are less common. I don't know. Just suggestions.
ehhh, this could be soo much better! i don't agree with El with liking it. you should expand more and explain WHY you think you should be hated, etc. i'm new to your work, but i can tell you can write and this isn't a best.
this is quite sad but i like it. I like because it touches my heart. it kinda reaches out to my own personal feelings. nice write. now i really hope you dont really want people to hate you because you are worth more. i know i dont know you but i know also know noone deserve to be hated for no real reason.
Submission Name: just hate me
