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    dots Submission Name: For You, I Willdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 636
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    dotsFor You, I Willdots
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    Obliterate the moon,
    Steal the stars,
    Stop the pouring rain,
    As it swiftly falls...

    Move wide mountains,
    Drain oceans and seas,
    Capture clouds to pocket,
    Reverse the chilling breeze.

    Bring back those feelings,
    You thought you'd lost,
    Remind you how to smile,
    Make you happy at any cost.

    To see you be yourself again,
    I will patiently wait,
    I share your pain and joy, my love
    You are forever my soul mate.




    Submitted on 2006-10-29 15:12:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this one is pretty deep. I like it! In a way, it seems to me that the person has a gaurdian angel that would do anything to make them happy even though they aren't exactly around anymore. I'm not for sure if you meant it that way, but that's how I saw it. It's pretty good either way. And thank you for commenting my poem, Death Beseech You.

    - MEG -
    | Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by PolaroidMemory | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the image you try to send saying there is nothing you wouldn't do just to make one person happy...

    thanks for sharing

    Penny
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by pennymarie | [ Reply to This ]


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