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    dots Submission Name: Fog over sunrisedots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 503/510/143
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFog over sunrisedots
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    This moment, this space -
    breathing free now,
    Sometimes unsure of the morning tomorrow,
    as dew-caressed twilight in a
    eclipsed vaccum;

    I keep walking,
    with half-asleep exhausted soul,
    Breathing in orange-essenced air,
    Sometimes, someone would walk with me,
    Going their own way later,
    Like travellers seeking their own home,
    A quick smile, a rare hug and
    love - failing test of time,
    everything -
    a fog over sunrise.





    Submitted on 2006-10-29 15:15:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful. I'm infatuated. These kind of writings here are something I yearn to read everyday on this site. I wouldn't know what to say. I never noticed you before in here. Gotta make that right.
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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