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    dots Submission Name: just finedots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsjust finedots
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    just Fucked up
    .
    Insincere
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    Nonbold
    .
    and Emo




    Submitted on 2006-10-29 15:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short and simple. Straight to the point and describes who you are.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]


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