The ones i love

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The ones i love

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The worst pain knowing you cant protect the ones you love most you tried to help them but one by one they still get hurt like all the others why is it always the ones we love who get hurt who ket killed who get raped beaten bruised beyond recognition i try my hardest to protect them and still the world tears them down crying helps them less than doing nothing i stay strong if only for the ones i love

Submitted on 2006-10-29 16:25:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is so touching, and it is written with such tenderness and concern! I've often wondered why bad things seem to happen more to the "good guys" than to the bad guys!

| Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

Beautiful poem. Always stand up for your friends. Never let them down and they will in turn help you too. Katana

| Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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