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the world
the world isn't so dark, that all light is gone, its beautiful, i know, i can still see it, though i feel pain, and see hardships, the beauty in the world, is brighter than anything, and this is what keeps me confident, for the future, that there will be a day , when we will all smile, and everyone will see, the beauty all around us, for now i'll watch, and hope that day comes soon. |
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| I'll have to take up Katana's viewpoint on this. I believe there is a beauty in this world, but it's more in the natural around us. Much of humanity's current method sickens me, and I find it hard to reconcile people as a whole with the small number of individuals I know and love. I hope, I sincerely hope, that the world changes while I'm still this side of the grave. It's got sixty years or so. However, with what I've seen, I can't be holding my breath. Keep your eyes open, Lou. --crimson echo | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ] | Beauty hoped for and soon to be revealed! This is very peaceful and reassuring! Nice work, Louise! | | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ] | This is really beautiful | I too have a vision of World Peace happening in my lifetime but if it dosent I know as a fact it will come in due time It has too Its the only way this world will be saved from man made negativity destroying Gods Beautiful Gift I like the way you wrote this This was to me a Plea to hopefully make others aware we are destroting the Earth and we have to come together as One to save Her Beautiful Form Excellent Job!!! I look forward to reading more writes from you God Bless Ron Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | I hope it comes real soon. For when it does all of heaven will shine upon us. That's the best thing you can hope for. | Katana | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ] | i agree, this is beautiful.a poem full of hope..it makes a refreshing change. | i also agree with katana, i hope it comes real soon! thank you for sharing this, whirl** | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ] | |
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