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    dots Submission Name: First Piecedots
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    Author: Lumiere
    ASL Info:    17/f/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 400
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 602



    Description:
       Romantic Story


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    dotsFirst Piecedots
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    Chapter 1 - Wicked Thoughts

    I've been having these weird dreams recently, dreams of a person who's come to release me, a man, all male and dominant looking, dark as night and cold as ice but within the depths of his eyes loyalty, honor and trust can all be read, but this person who is he ...

    Eleanor sat up from her bed just as first light began to spill through the unclosed curtains. Puzzlement was the first that occured to Eleanor she couldn't imagine such a being ever existing upon the same soil that she resides in.




    Submitted on 2006-10-29 19:36:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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