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    dots Submission Name: Maya enn uyiraidots

    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       Well its a tamil poem i know how to speak but not to read and write. For those who dont know the meaning well i have given it on the side. The topic is "maya let me live".
    Dont know who maya is then read my previous poem---mymaya-->a dream..

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    dotsMaya enn uyiraidots

    kangalal ennai mathhi
    en kanav valvathupol
    en kanavae, ennai vala vidu.
    (changed me with your eyes
    my dream alive
    my dream let me live)

    swasitha idhayam polae
    un neesam indru thudithu
    en idhayamae, ennai vala vidu.
    (a breathing heart
    you love that makes it suffer
    my heart let me live)

    kannir en kangal
    oru thuli varthai ill
    en kadhaliae, ennai vala vidu.
    (tear in my eyes
    with one drop of a word
    my love let me live)

    anbu indru oru varthai
    oru varam nee anbae
    maya, ennai vala vidu.
    (love is now only a word
    you a boon
    my maya let me live)

    Submitted on 2006-10-30 05:12:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting and intriguing. I really like the language.
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]

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