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    dots Submission Name: Confessionsdots
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    Author: tina_mik
    ASL Info:    17/f/malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 21/22/20
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 910



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       just having a bad day. can't do anything but write about it? pathetic? i don't know...


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    why do i strive to be perfect,
    when everyone knows it's impossible?
    why do i strive for the best
    when no one ever gives a damn?
    why do i try to make them happy,
    when i am hurting inside?
    why do i cry this silent tears
    when i know no one will wipe them away?
    why do i dream for the impossible,
    when i know it will only hurt more when it doesn't come true?
    why do i still have to hurt,
    when i have gone through this so many times before?

    no matter how bad it is,
    let it be between me and you,
    a blank page with a broken writer,
    who's life doesn't mean a thing,
    to keep smiling when it hurts,
    to be strong when she falls,
    to bring smiles to people she loves.

    at the end of the day,
    lonely tears she cries,
    true feelings she hides




    Submitted on 2006-10-30 09:39:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think it's a good poem ..really ..but I"m olso think the -why and when- thing make it a littel bet weak... but it still a nice poem with heart felt words..good job
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      I felt the same way once, but then I gave up tring to be so perfect and haveing the want of me people to like me, and guess what...it still hurts, no one is a winner in this game of depression..of life.
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]



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