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    dots Submission Name: Appeasedots
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    Author: wakethedead
    ASL Info:    34/M/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.99 - 13/13/9
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Dark
    Total Views: 481
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 992



    Description:
       A song of searching the inner self and reminding oneself to think it through.

    Bad things happen... and it will continue to happen...
    So ... pacify with ease.


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    dotsAppeasedots
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    Constrained to feel the past
    a way to get by (it)

    Deranged from all anxiety
    That drips across this tragedy
    Our chance has been denied.

    Pacify with ease
    When hearing the awful plead
    Without the lighter day
    Pacify with ease
    Pursue and persevere
    Amend a vital way

    At ease to make amends
    With all these instances
    Still battling out, a time get back

    When sufferings gone mad
    Suffocating in a whirlwind of endless desires


    Pacify with ease
    When hearing the awful plead
    Without the lighter day
    Pacify with ease
    Pursue and persevere
    Commend a vital way

    They’ve surrounded us with the flame of lies


    Pacify with ease
    When hearing the awful plead
    Without the lighter day
    Pacify with ease
    Pursue and persevere
    Commend a vital way




    Submitted on 2006-10-30 16:43:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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